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Chapel of Memories

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Literature Text

Orange light from stained glass
Lying on the drained wood floor
Taking in the smell
Nothing could be so peaceful
Worshipping faith in silence
A short tanka I wrote.
From what I know, a tanka is five lines long, no rhyme scheme; syllables organized as 5-7-5-7-7.

I'm probably wrong, though.

I usually am. >>;
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yenreit's avatar
^_^ you're not wrong, that's what a tanka is.
it's so pretty! i love this poem style and you really put it to justice!